Once upon a time there was a superhero called meetballman. He lived in a meatball ov cors. He has a big talent he can shot meatballs out of his hands. One day he ran out of meatball power. He felt sad. So he went to the meetball tree.
Friday, March 22, 2019
6 sentence story
This week in writing we wrote a 6 sentence story about creating a character and adding detail. Our fows was on creating sentence. we learnt that the four
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Hi Bailey, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. How creative were you to think about a character called meatball man, very cool. Next time I would like you to self check your work to see that it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to hearing back from you.
Miss Goslin
Hi Bailey, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. How creative were you to write about a character called meatball man, very cool. Next time I would like you to self check your work to see if it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to hearing back from you.
Miss Goslin