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Thursday, April 23, 2020

teeth

Today in writing we had to write about the story teeth and the story was about two old Men and loses there teeth and here's my writing 
 hoped you like it here's the link to the video  comment your favorite bit
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 29, 2020 at 1:50 PM

    Hi Bailey. Well done with your story. I liked the part when the man sneezed and his teeth came out.
    Mrs Fanning

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  2. AnonymousApril 30, 2020 at 2:13 PM

    Kia ora Bailey! I hear you have been working super hard in your Google Hangouts. Well done! What a funny clip, you have done a good job describing the scene. My favourite part was their reaction when the old man's teeth came out. When you write the number 2 as a word it is spelt two. Please keep blogging the great work you are doing, I would love to see more!
    Miss Williamson

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